Treasure

by Marcus   Aug 25, 2006


You are worth more than platinum and gold
and my feelings for you can't be controlled,
your smile is priceless and could never be cloned or sold,

it is truly out of this world,
shining bright like a diamond and pearl,
to me you are such a valuable girl,

you are worth more than emeralds, topazes, sapphires, and rubies,
thats why making you smile has become one of my duties,
you always make me smile; just from thinking about your beauties,

and every time I get to see you smile it relieves some of my stress.
If I am the reason that you are smiling; it makes me feel blessed
and it makes me feel what I believe is the definition of happiness.

I find thoughts of you in my head all day just choosing to linger,
Its like you're the cocaine to me and I'm addicted like a binger,
I'm feeling you more than I feel the nerves in the tip of my finger,

This feeling that you make me feel is better than joy,
You found a special place in my heart where you chose to deploy,
you built a bond with me; that no one but you can destroy,

Every since then I have not been feeling the same,
Because when I think of you it be killing the pain,
What you make me feel is kind of hard to explain,

All those days without you in my life I truly had to suffer,
But since you are here now; those days without you made me tougher,
Because they didn't kill me; now no more days shall I suffer

Now I am full of too much happiness to measure,
Just being in your presence brings me an abundance of pleasure,
You bring all of this joy to me; you are my treasure!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    This was a very nice poem. But I think
    you put to much focus on the rhyming.
    Don't get me wrong the poem made
    perfect sense and I think you have a
    wonderful talent. I just think that you
    should dig a little deeper and focus least on the rhymes. Just let the words
    flow and you will have yourself a perfect
    poem. Keep up the good work though
    I'll be checking back with you from
    time to time because I believe you
    have wonderful talent. 5/5

    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    AWWWWW. Oh my gosh! That was soo good! It was certainly a delight reading your poetry! Lovely, simply lovely.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ellie

    Same girl? :-P Anyways, the imagery is very good. Nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is a very nice poem! you got thetalent in writting love poems! it had alot of emotion it in! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Audrey

    Throughout the entire reading I had a smile of complete pleasure on my face. Nalley said it best "a release of untamed passion"

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