Wow that was really good.
very expressive!

keep up the good work!

sophie:)

Awwww that was so sad....I'm sorry if that really happened. This wasa beautiful write...it was well written, had a good flow, and I loved the true emotion you put into it. This was amazing.
5.5
Breanna

Well written... gud

That was beautiful, reminds me so much of how it ended for me and my lover.

Awwah this is such a sad poem, i really hope that this didnt hapen to you.. i loved the way it was written, and i felt the characters emotions.. great write 5/5.. Best Wished.. Kirsty Palmer

Awww , amazing poem ! i really liked it =)
take care hun =)

p.s. remember me ? lol !