Intoxicated Souls

Thanks for this poem, it really hit a chord. I wasn't abused by my father, but I was by my boyfriend in high school, and it had left very strong marks on the rest of my life. The flow in this poem was ecellent, each line lead to the next. You captured the emotion perfectly, that though one is abused, it always seems for some reason or another, that it is our fault. Well written.

-Ellie

Thats like the best saddest poem i ever read in my life OMG i envy your writing lol Your a great poem writer

Great poem

Damn Nikkz.. I Couldn't Neva Write No Poem Like Dis Hea.. You Hella Passionate Wit Yoz Nah'Mean??.. You Got Mad Talent Ma.. I Kno I Be Tellin You Da Same Ish All Da time.. Buh Nah'Mean?.. Yo Writez Jus Alwaiz Surprise Me Er'Time..

Yo Main Nigga D..Get At Me.. (Typin Hella "Guttah") Lol..

I Love Yu Ma..

Nikki dear, what a beautiful sad poem you penned here, it's simply but so meaningful and inspirations......i liked the way how you describle them...brilliant.....thanks for sharing your poem and your nice comment on my stuff....have a hreat day, take care, bert.

Keep ur chin up
stay positive
n have faith in urself!