I like it. alot of emotion. wow, so much is going on. that's hard to do. keep writing:)

Omg... this is gut-wrenching especially the end. The sad thing is sometimes the other parent knows whats going on, and does nothing. Or they don't believe their kid, which is worse. *hugs* great job Nikki XXXXX
JL

Holy crap this was incredible. I did not predict the ways you made this poem go, and every change in direction surprised and amazed me! Wow, wow wow. I am so touched. I also liked how it was through the eyes of the child, that point of view really added positively to your poem. My heart was wrentched in the reading. You are a compassionate soul to make a shout out for those who can't on their own.

-Tainted

This poem is amazing!!! you write REALLY well =] keep up the good work x

You have real talent!

Keep ur chin up
stay positive
n have faith in urself!

Nikki dear, what a beautiful sad poem you penned here, it's simply but so meaningful and inspirations......i liked the way how you describle them...brilliant.....thanks for sharing your poem and your nice comment on my stuff....have a hreat day, take care, bert.

Damn Nikkz.. I Couldn't Neva Write No Poem Like Dis Hea.. You Hella Passionate Wit Yoz Nah'Mean??.. You Got Mad Talent Ma.. I Kno I Be Tellin You Da Same Ish All Da time.. Buh Nah'Mean?.. Yo Writez Jus Alwaiz Surprise Me Er'Time..

Yo Main Nigga D..Get At Me.. (Typin Hella "Guttah") Lol..

I Love Yu Ma..

Thats like the best saddest poem i ever read in my life OMG i envy your writing lol Your a great poem writer

Great poem

Thanks for this poem, it really hit a chord. I wasn't abused by my father, but I was by my boyfriend in high school, and it had left very strong marks on the rest of my life. The flow in this poem was ecellent, each line lead to the next. You captured the emotion perfectly, that though one is abused, it always seems for some reason or another, that it is our fault. Well written.

-Ellie