Two-thumbs up!!

Very nicely done! Great use of wording too! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Loved this poem Simon, and thanks for posting that challenge! The group needs more like this!

Sie, you always seem to have a wonderful way with words. It seems to me that your poem could have a symbolic meaning to it, but then again my brain isn't wired the same as everyone else's. I love the images that comes to mind. Great poem!

I truly love the imagery and words. Excellent job.

WOW it's so...so WOW!!
good luck on you others!

I liked your poem. It was like I was right there standing by the tree.

This is a truly lovely, truly 'poetic' piece.....a pleasure to read and to feel........
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In the Constructive Spirit, I offer the following for your consideration.....: "Starved from the delightful summer rays"....I think you mean 'starving for '...
also....'The gentle breeze whistling *past'....or, perhaps:...'The gentle breeze, whistling passed'?

Peace.

Very nicely done with some beautiful imagery. Congradulations on the award also, well deserved. :] ..Keep it up!

Natalie``

Beautiful job. It's like a portrait of art. Great descriptions.

That is pretty good, i can't write nice poetry but that was really good.

Very good! Nature lives and youve captured is essence in this piece!
5/5

I love poetry about nature but especially when I can relate to it,I love the spring and wait so impatiently for it.a beautiful write.