Your poem is really well written (though there is a little spell mistake in the 3rd stanza, now, not noe)
it portraits an difficult to understand love (he hurts you, but there's love anyway), what i also like to do myself... =)
the flow is very nice, the structure is a bit confusing, but very original...the rhyme scheme contrasts with the structure to create a really nice effect...(i don't know who dared to downrate you, this poem is wonderful...)
5/5
keep going
*isabel*