Comments : What's The Secret?

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    WOW!! the imagery you create is very vivid..almost like a story in poetry fornat...great write!!

    my fav part was:

    It's in her hands that gently touch
    and reach out to the weak;
    It's in her mind that knows to hold;
    to understand and seek.

    those lines are very thought provocative and very well written!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Superb write!! Laura has the same thought as I... This poem has a wonderful story, written so nicely in a glorious poetry style.

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Each poem written in different style, you've your stlye writiing laura, unique and creative penned you potray here...awesome!

    anyway, thanks for your beautiful comment on my stuff, much appreciated! have a great day...keep writing, take care.