I thought it was very good! i give it a 5! thanks for commenting me back! its not that good but i would like it if you read the poem hurled words that i wrote. thanks

***ali***

Fabulous sense of writing courtney u have a great flare with dark poems keep writting xox luv ya sam

Wow huni....
ur dark poems really show emotion and that darkness it shud show...wonderful poem...i loved the way it was all written out..like it all just linked so well...5/5 keep it up :) xoxo

WOW. Im speechless. I loved how you rhymed.. I really loved it.. 5/5 from me. I also have 2 other poems out theyre called I Totally Give Up and Out on the streets. Welcome about the comment! N thankx about the comment~

You asked me to comment........This brought tears to my eyes...

I Love this Poem..just as same as i feel deep inside..keep em' comin..

Its so dark nd emotional. i love the way it sounds. its beautiful..
Amz

Awesome poem i loved it. and i reali liked the line

A broken heart, this young girl will fade

i dnt kno why it jst gerabbed my attention
keep up th good work
kitty

Im speachless but good poem nice to touching a way to open up the eyes
kisskiss eL

I love this poem you can see it happen as you read it and youre very talented... keep it up red

I really like your poetry to! ive been pretty good. right now im trying to get thru alot of things but ill make it. how have you been?

Wow u were right this poem and the other ones are really similar to the one that i wrote and i gonna put one more on in like 2 min so yeah check it out...

Verry nice Its good