Awww Carlee!! I was thinking that by the title this poem would be a silly one....and now that i read it...i can see its not really at all...its actually beautifully sad...melancholic I think the word is. Ha. I could be wrong. Don't know, i'll look it up later. LOL! I love you Car! terrific poem!!

OK so Car, amazing job, for some reason, this has got to be a favorite of the month for me!! I mostly just loved the story behind it even though it was really sad...That is why I don't want to work at a fast food resteraunt or grocery store, I'm afraid I'll end up with those feelings and hate it! I hope this isn't about you! You had amazing lines ..my favorite had to be "SHe wishes she could order a different life" haha even though this was sad to me, I giggled because its totally something I would say..I read it as sarcastic whether you were trying to come across that way or not!
Excellent poem..I'm serious about this being my favorite that I've read in at least a month ..maybe more!
Chels

Just another fast food girl
Covered in grease and grime
Just another beautiful dreamer
Who is running out of time

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Amazing ending Car !
You have painted a picture of such lonesome sadness .
I myself was also expecting a funny poem from the title and was totally not expecting this one .
Wonderfully written Car, leaving me in search of some tissue .