Eternal

by Chris Rodriguez   Aug 26, 2006


Nothing yet has really sunk in,
Everything is so different now,
Was it because of the way I've changed,
Some things never do,

The one thing I desperately need,
Is the only person I can't see,
looks like it will stay that way,
You're gone,
Now There is no one home,

I never realized how late I was,
For you I would...,
They say we're too young to love,
For awhile I believed that,
But now that time has run out,
I've come to say I do,
For me this is my final goodbye,

I thought of all the stupid things I've said,
But if you left it up to me,
I wouldn't change a thing,

I would have shown you everything,
From the mountain to the endless blue Mediterranean,
The family and the stupid loving cousins,
We'd spend weeks on the beach,
Write letters back home saying life could never be better,

But if he is what you want,
If this is what you need,
I won't stop you,

I never realized how late I was,
For you I would...do anything,
They say we're too young to love,
And for awhile I believed that,
But now that my time has run out,
I need to say I do,

For me this is my final goodbye,
So let me screw this one up right,
Erin I love you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Linds

    It reminded me of some one that hurt me in my past and we are no longer friends...I was thinking of him as i read this

    "Nothing yet has really sunk in,
    Everything is so different now,
    Was it because of the way I've changed,
    Some things never do,

    The one thing I desperately need,
    Is the only person I can't see,
    looks like it will stay that way,
    You're gone,
    Now There is no one home, "

    Such strong words there.

  • 18 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Wonderful flow and great expressions!!! keep it up!! =]]

  • 18 years ago

    by NightKeeper

    Wow thats wicked good! it should be a song! id listen to it..thanks for commenting on my poem!