Wow thats wicked good! it should be a song! id listen to it..thanks for commenting on my poem!

Wonderful flow and great expressions!!! keep it up!! =]]

It reminded me of some one that hurt me in my past and we are no longer friends...I was thinking of him as i read this

"Nothing yet has really sunk in,
Everything is so different now,
Was it because of the way I've changed,
Some things never do,

The one thing I desperately need,
Is the only person I can't see,
looks like it will stay that way,
You're gone,
Now There is no one home, "

Such strong words there.