I really like this poem...it's really really goog!!! very sad but good...

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Jenn

Good try but i think your poem isn;t deep enough. however it contents many truths

I dont understand how my poem isnt deep enough..but i think your comment isnt deep enough. please let me know how i can fix it :)! thanks

Such a tradgedy. :(

I love your work, it similar to what I write ;)

For one, I love the title you chose- it was a real hook. It's amazing how you can tell such good stories and yet seem to not put the rhyme and flow in jepardy! Looking forward to reading more!