That was really good, it really flowed well and was very sweet. A great poem overall, well done
xxxxx

This is great hon, Absolootly wonderful.

A wonderfully sweet poem with a flawlesss flow

Loved it keep it up and ill keep reading :):)

would you read my newest poem please? its called The Sacrifice Of Love thnx xxx alex xxx

I don't say this often, but I really like this poem. It says all it needs to say without billowing on forever with dodgy rhyme and messy meter written in the name of poetry.

You have a good grasp on what poetry really is about, showing the message and being able to convey it with the minimum of words.

This really makes me think about my younger sister (younger by 16 years). She may have been an accident, but she's a miraculous one! I think this is why I relate to this piece so well.

Great effort. If I voted this one would get a five, and I don't say that a lot.

Okay this was good.. I felt that the last line was a little too short to really flow well.. Although I liked this poem, I did not feel that it was (5) material.. The descriptions were great but they weren't amazing.. If you understand where I am coming from? All in all though, I thought it was a beautiful, sweet poem.. So I am going to give it a 5/5 anyway!

I found this poem very sweet. I have a new addition in my home and so I can relate to this so much. What a lovely dedication to your sister. Very nice job:)

Nice

Short, sweet, splendid! I loved it alot , keep up the good work
xoxo**Em

WOW, the way i felt when my brother was born.
great poem biscuit.
*shay*

Beautiful... really shows you care for your sister

Awwwwwww I love this poem hun, made me smile. The flow was just perfect to fantastic writing a billion out of 5