by myshiningstar14 Aug 26, 2006
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
**This poem is called a 4 senses poem, in this poem I decided to describe a way of life, without the use of being able to see.This poem isn't really about the ocean, so see if you can figure out what i was getting at, there's more htan one answer.enjoy. ** |
by CoLliN
OK its a beautiful poem... |
Very nice i like the flow of this peom it's just right sounds like a place i'd wanna hangout |
Great job. I really like it. Keep it up. |
I likey this one!!!! |
by Corruption
I love this poem it is so different from wat i am use to reading and i lied the change. i also lied the way u desribed everything though i think that is the point of it:D i really liked it |