I love this poem it is so different from wat i am use to reading and i lied the change. i also lied the way u desribed everything though i think that is the point of it:D i really liked it

keenan

I likey this one!!!!

Great job. I really like it. Keep it up.

Very nice i like the flow of this peom it's just right sounds like a place i'd wanna hangout

OK its a beautiful poem...
well the first thing i got from it is that ur probably at the ocean...well every sense i feel is it all has something to do with water...whether at one point your in the ocean...or..pool...then i see something as if your in your own bath tub... but i think i'm wrong
Nice Poem