by Catastrophic Beauty Aug 26, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
science fiction
Laying down in her bed, dreaming words unsaid |
Vivid imagery! very well written and tells a great story! nice work. |
by Katie
This is a fantastic write, your descriptions were so vivid. It was almost like being able to see it in picture form whilst reading the words. Clever rhyming too. I liked this very much. |
by coupon can
Awesome poem. like ppl other ppl have said great description and emotion. truely amazing. |
Great description, such emotion, dont know why this poem has such a low rating!!!! great effort keep up the work... |
by lonelynow
Hey this was great! It was a great idea and it was extremely well written. you really have talent. |