O wow. Excellent poem. I love the words and the type of poem "Palindrome" I've never heard of it and I love it. |
I like th way that poem went very ood i wanna try one!!! keep the good writting!! comment on my poems!!! |
by Jessica
Wow, that looks so complicated.. I thought it sounded familiar as I read the second stanza and I guess I know why.. Lol. The flow was good and the words you chose full of detail.. Nicely done! 5/5 |
by Sarah Ann
Excellent poem!!! Your different ways of writing are breathtaking. I love the diversity in your words, and the images you capture with such powerful meanings. Keep it up!!! |
by LadyPearl
Good job again. There isn't much I can say. |
Short and sweet but powerful good job i love it |
I really like how the first line of the poem describes a heart and love and the same time. And then it seems like the next line reflects ears and then next eyes, although I'm not sure if you meant it that way. Awesome! Very meaningful! 5/5 |
A softer poem but it holds so much meaning in it. I think this was wasn't as strong as the one I read before but it was well written with the style you chose. The effect casted love in a pure form and the second part felt more like love's desire. |