Blue tears from the face of an angel

by Bleed-Like-Me   Mar 8, 2004


The angel was a girl
Not too far from heaven
Just flew out to save
A young hepless woman

The woman was in danger
But this she could not see
She was a little bit lonely
She just wanted to be free

Her boyfriend left that night
He left her all alone
He said "im through with u"
And wouldnt answer his phone

The woman finally gave up
Thinking there was nothing she could do
But when her feelings started to mix
It was more then anyone could fix

Her tears came silently that night
Waking up several times
No one knew what she was about to do

This is when the angel came down
She looked upon the woman
She watched her every move
But when the woman started to cut
The angel could not move
She watched with fear in her eyes
Then she started to realize
This woman, so lonely
Would soon be gone
If she didnt move a long

The womans blood rushed down her arm
Getting weaker as it came
The angel could not bare it
She screamed out her name
But nothing could be heared
Nothing could be done
A tear came down
And just fell to the ground
The womans body, numb

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  • this poem is soooo brillant better then any of my work !!! and ur so yung 2........its sad but creative. brillaint keep up the excellent work
    luv **TaShA**

  • 20 years ago

    by wings.in.flight.

    This is one of the best poems ive eva read, keep up the gud work!!

    Luv Fire

  • 20 years ago

    by Bleed-Like-Me

    Hey, thanks u guys, actaully it is NOT true. I was just putting it together one day and wasnt quite sure how ppl would react, but thanks for taking time to tell me, i appreciate it and i will check out urs!

  • 20 years ago

    by Natalie

    WOWWWWW!! That wa so saddd, it gave me tingles :( I hope that that wasn't from experience that maybe you was the angel. Maybe you're just very creative, but that was a really good poem! Well done
    xXx Natalie xXx