TeLl Me WhAt WaS It

by xxxRaNsOmxxx   Aug 27, 2006


Fearless defenses controlling over me.
what was it that you didn't see?
was it my smile every time i saw you?
was it when i told said that i loved you too?
where did i go so wrong?
you broke me down I'm left so unstrong.
was it when i called you every night to say i loved you?
was it when i wanted to help you through?
when did i fail to be what i could be?
standing here tell me what do you not see?
was it the way i hugged you meaning it with my all.
was it when you let me go and watched me fall?
was it when you finally watched me cry?
was it when i gave it all away to try?
what step did i not take right?
was it all my dreams i had of you every night?
was it all the things that i said to you?
was my love just to true?
how did i end up falling so hard on the ground?
was it when i promised id never let you down?
piece by piece you tour me apart.
was it when i gave you my heart?

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  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Aww thats soo good. i really like it.. it has good rhythm and flow.. its amazing. u have so much talent.. i wish i could write like u. ne ways keep on writing great poem.
    take care
    luve angie