The Night Angels Sang

by JamesP   Aug 27, 2006


What happened that night
Between you and I?
Was it all real
Or was it all a lie

There diamonds that night
Within the velvet sky
And all the angels sang
\"How lucky that guy!\"

Then it all ended
The final note was sung
And my Angel left me
The diamonds all gone

I live now in the City of Angels
Yet i see None
But I will never forget that night
When diamonds sparkled
And angels sung.

*it needs work. i don't like it yet. it doesn't give the emotion i was feeling justice.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey James,
    I liked the last stanza. especially the first two lines of the last stanza :)
    hope you're doing well,
    take care,
    Marjan

  • 17 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I don't really care if you like it, I do, lol.

    twas amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    I like it... let me know once you finish it, yeah?

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