That was very sad. i hope everything works out for you in the end if this was based on your life. you're a great poem writer (if thats even a word) =) and i reallllyyy liked this part: |
by letmebeyours
Sry to be repetitive but i also liked the part about ur life becoming a boring love song i can relate to that..i use to so easily sing songs about being in love with someone who isnt in love with you or w.e but now i hate all the feelings it brings up but to everyone else its just melodies and verses....went off on a tangent huh?! lol anyways good poem |
by Goran Rahim
Nice poem dude, you are doing so great, keep it up, 5/5 from me. |