Good poem. So sweet and heartfelt.
"i cried for hours on end the other night
all because i couldn't bear the pain
i could not stand seeing you love her
i didn't want the night to end in vain"

^^ I like that stanza the most, it appeals to me more and is the deepest.
The whole poem was great though, the flow was excellent and the rhyming was good. Keep it up!

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I really like this poem. I can relate heaps. I hate how guys can just use you, but love someone else. I know how it feels. Great poem. I also like that stanza the most. It's hard seeing someone that uses you love someone else.
Much love,
Tammie xo