Comments : Something Real...

  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    I love you so much, it made me cry, i will always be here

    Sara

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a good written poem! heart felt too

    i love the part

    "You gave me something.
    It wasn't much at all.
    But it broke my fall."

    thanks for the comment on my poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by David

    Nyc

  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Aww, it was very sweeeet! That person must be really important to you...I really liked your poem and it was very beautifully writen! Nice work! Luckily i can relate to your poem, i have always had a great friend by my side, too!Anyway, keep writing!
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Awwww...beautiful...very touching and sweet!
    Well penned!
    Kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx