Gr8 poem. it hav alot of meaning to it. i like the poem. keep writing:)

Wow excellent poem. So deep and powerful. The rhyming was great and it flowed really well. Keep it up && take care

I really liked this poem, you can really feel the pain in it. I can relate to this alot, but obviously i'm not dead. well I gave it a 5/5. Keep up the great work, I hope to read more by you soon.
As Always,
Left_2_Die

I love this poem!!!!!!!it's so good loads of feeling but in a dark sad way well done 5/5!
auna

Very good poem 5/5 nicly written keep up the good work!

Good job! I liked it a lot. Good work with the rhyming ("collor" should be "collar" though). But other than that, great job!

Sweet

That was soooooo good! I loved it so much! This is my most favorite poem EVER!

Wow that was really beautiful and so tragic. you really hit the nail on the head or whatever that expression is. but seriously its great. i cant wait to read more of your poems.

Omg its really good! but are you ok ?
~♥~

Hey... i really liked this poem, u didnt just use any old word to use to rhyme, it all fit in well and was great and flowing, really deep in thought and feelings, really well done.

Linds x

Wow.youve got talent hun.that was so well explained and it flowed so well.i could never have done even remotely as good.great work =]
--lexie

Your the wickedest i loved it totally deep dont stop writing your great. 5/5

Omg wow.
so much emotion.
and detail i could like paint
the picture. very very good.
i loved it.
-Amberinaa*

Omg wow.
so much emotion.
and detail i could like paint
the picture. very very good.
i loved it.
-Amberinaa*

Wow.
i loved it.
the repition of the one line was great.
"Its raining in the graveyard
the scar upon her throat
it slowly starts to tingle
as Satan starts to gloat..."
that stanza was amazing. good work.