This poem was real sad ut very nice... plz comment on my new poems thanks

Is this inspired by a dream?.
The first poem I've wrote is inspired by a dream, it was long ago though...
Keep on writing on what u feel and like.

Oh, so sad... it sounded like one of those punky/gothic type depressive poems that most teams write these days (me included :-)) but when I reached the end, it changed from Avril Lavigne-style lyrical writing to...something deeper. Much sadder, filled with meaning, in those simple words. So sad.

//T.L.//

I think it is ver y meaningful! n deep! but i could be wrong! like i liked it loads!!!!!

P.s. 5/5!

Aww such a good poem!