Wow...this was amazing! I especially liked the first stanza. Definately a 5/5

And thanks for the comment...I know I haven't written in a while. Mainly because my computer crashed, but also because I haven't been able to write how I feel lately..

But hopefully I'll have more quotes for you to read. I'm glad you enjoy them =]

This is one of those calm sad poems that I like. It's pritty simple, got a good rhythem, flow, rhym screme, plot. Good job. My mind started to falter in the secon stanza, but not too much.

I'm thinking kind of slow today, so I apologise for a not-so descriptive coment. :)

5/5