The best way you get comments is commenting on others' work. It's a nice reciprocal arrangement. I liked the poem a lot, especially your use of chaos. Your rhymes were sturdy and I like the resolve. It did seem kind of bare of details, imagery, etc; but it was definitely good.

It has a alot of emotions on it,..
Very nicelt done..
Keep your head high!!
-singko-

This is very touching. You have a great talent and skill to pour out so much emotion where a reader can understand the stryggles yet the desire to live dispite the pain and lonliness.

Good job!

---Sher

Its amazing poets very expressive . i really love the last line... but i truely like this poem i was enjoyed reading this keep on writing i know u have a talent to show, thanks for sharing ur great poem i like it 5/5

A very great poem and welcome to the site, you are great.

Thanks everyone for the good reinforcments. It makes me feel much better knowing that this, my most heart-felt poem is appreciated and understood... Rae

Thanks for your comments...and I REALLY liked this poem. It really flowed but it was still simple and I liked it. I'm sorry you had to go through that, but you expressed this very well. I'd love to see more of your work soon! ~Jules

This was an amazing poem. you have such a talent to put it simply yet imply such emotion. I felt so caught up in it. Great job....:)