Comments : Seasons

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    Hey Nate! You haven't posted new poetry in ages, it's good to see some more.

    It was kind of interesting how you spread the relationship throughout the seasons. And I just thought I'd mention that I love the 'relationship lake' metaphor, very creative.

    It's cute, most of your poems are. Nice job.

  • 18 years ago

    by perfectly unperfect

    I loved it