Beautiful, I loved it..

xXx

Excellent poem loved it 5/5

An awesome message written in a homespun bottle for all to enjoy. my favorite of yours so far.

your servant:
david

This was good I loved it. excellent word choice, and strong emtions. Thanks for the comments

A good poem I enjoyed it very much.

I don't like anything about this poem. It has too many mistakes. Flow is bad and atmosphere is poor. You could describe emotions a lot better. Wording isn't good and you have many repetition.