I love you more than a friend

by LINDZ..   Aug 27, 2006


From the first night i talked 2 you.
i could never imagine we could
end up this way.
All the late nights we talked we
never ran out of things to say
Wev been through bad but mostly good
for you i would do anything i could.
With me and you we laughed aolot and fought
When you played base ball my heart you caught
Even though you made me cry an broke mi heart
Mi love for you will stay and never part
Theres something about your smile an dthe way you say my name
i really care for you and hope you not just playin a game.
That night underneath the sky the stars sparkeled in your eyes.
When i looked at you baby you gave me butterflies
You touched my face and i felt my knees
go weak
And i knew for my first true love i no longer had to seek.

i wrote this 2 matthew!!!...

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  • 2 years ago

    by Dana

    Truth.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this, it was sweet.

    I thought some of the rhyming seemed forced and found the flow to be a little off in places.

    There is also a couple spelling errors that need fixing.

    But apart from that, I enjoyed it, your emotion for him shines through the words and it was very cute. 4/5