Haha that was good! Two thumbs up for creativity, I don't think anybody can read this without smiling. The last few lines were really good too, of course. Great job.

Great funny poem, it really made me laugh. the flow was a bit disjointed, but as Jaime said nobody can read this without smiling.

Laura
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ps. read some of mine

Ohhh. Nifty, I like it. Very well written. Hehe. Cute too.

Tehehehe... it made me giggle =]

Halarious! nicely written, I really enjoyed this one!

Hahaha wow this was so funny! I loved how you rhymed it and everything was great. I was laughing when I found out that Mrs. Smith had an affair on him with a microwave! good job!

LOL!!! that was pretty funny! liked this one alot and like the people above said nobody can read this without smiling! 5/5 oh and i loved the ending!
Take Care
And
Keep Smiling

-*-Tormented

Thanx for all the coments everyone!! i might come out with part 2 but you guyz have to wait!

Lol that was clever. soo funni xoxo

Cute and funny. Very creative... lol