Awww that's such a cute poem. I really like it.

Ok first off ever since is two words.

I like the message but you use 'me' far too often. Also punctuation would really help direct people through the flow of the poem.

I'll always have you in my heart does not have a rhyme. So I'd suggest 'In my heart you'll always stay'. Call it a freebie.

to me you never gave me pain
and for that love you gave me.

These two are really very clunky and you seriously need to fix them. The first line has me twice where it needs only one and the second lacks a rhyme.

I think you have a solid first draft but you need to re-write this, read it out loud at least twice and find the areas that clearly are not working.

Bret

This was cute. Really short, but it was heart-felt and written rather well. Great Work.

Aww it was soo cute!! i loved ittt
5

Wow amazing 5/5 u deserve no less the rhyming was great! and the flow was awesome good job!

This is so cute!
love is beautiful :)
i love this
it was written pretty good
good job!

Great poem, heartfelt, i can tell you used alot of emotions in this one, 5/5!!! your very talented, keep it up!!!

I really liked this poem. The flow was nice and your choice of words was lovely. When I finished reading it I almost wanted to say, "Aww."

Another great poem, but like I said.
Organize your poems into stanza's.
Like make it an abab, abcb, or aabb.
Stanza's just add structure inthe poems. Keep up the work you do have good poems. 5/5 God Bless

~*Tay*~

Aw..... this is so cute. this is really good