Footprints.

by Sarah Ann   Aug 27, 2006


Footprints.
Ours...
Delicately engraved in wet sand
And the waters wash over them
Even they can't...even they can't
Forever we are one,
Footprints
Ours...
They will always be there.

Everlasting...
Even the heavens sense our love
Jealousy...but nay,
Even they can't...even they can't
For the sun shines brightly above
Us...And our footprints
And the wind whispers:
"They will always be there"

((Non-rhyming I know...Probably doesn't make much sense either, but there is feeling in it for me. =/ ))

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  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Doesn't make much sense?!?! Who cares if it doesn't rhyme!!!??? This was so amazing. I love your use of words and how you put this whole poem together. Beautifully done. 5/5 Take care,

    [[ Poetess ]]

  • 18 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Hey sis nice poem. keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    It does make sense for me ;)
    I love your poem hun...it has something 2 do with me
    I cud understand how you felt when you wrte it...damnit I miss writing love poems but sadly I'm unable to do it at this moment =(

    damnit gal are you in love??? =P j.k
    great work hun
    Take care and stay the best
    P.S I did miss your poems sooooo much
    Love You
    NemO xxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Hind

    Its not the rythme that counts, its the poem its self, the meaning of the poem that makes it 'poetry'...good job ne ways ..5-5

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I think this poem was amazing Hun. You wrote it very well, and it did have alot of feeling, nicely done.

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