I think this poem was amazing Hun. You wrote it very well, and it did have alot of feeling, nicely done.

Its not the rythme that counts, its the poem its self, the meaning of the poem that makes it 'poetry'...good job ne ways ..5-5

It does make sense for me ;)
I love your poem hun...it has something 2 do with me
I cud understand how you felt when you wrte it...damnit I miss writing love poems but sadly I'm unable to do it at this moment =(

damnit gal are you in love??? =P j.k
great work hun
Take care and stay the best
P.S I did miss your poems sooooo much
Love You
NemO xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Hey sis nice poem. keep it up.

Doesn't make much sense?!?! Who cares if it doesn't rhyme!!!??? This was so amazing. I love your use of words and how you put this whole poem together. Beautifully done. 5/5 Take care,

[[ Poetess ]]