Wow, great emotions in this one,
very well written
exellent choose of words and nice flow.
overall an exellent poem

Awwwwwwwww
torm actually has a heart
all this time I thought you was only into me..lol jk jk
Awesome poem
some Rhyme in there
Good detail
and your word choice
the style
it was all good
great job
5/5
~MF~

This is filled with love, at a time where there was only despair. Well done. xx

That was great....I love it!!! keep it up

Good poem keep writing:) pls comment on mine thanks

I enjoy that so much xx keep writing wild rose

This poem is very cute..and shows exactly what love can do for you.keep writing,i love your work.

victoria

This was pretty good.. The flow worked well and wasn't bumpy.. But you had lots of grammer mistakes.. Also, if you are rhyming your poem.. You can't just use the same word again.. That is not what rhyming is.. Anyway, your imagery was beautiful.. And the love was clear.. So nice job 4/5

Wow the flow of this part was awsome

"Storms of life went away
Sunshine came running my way"

keep it up!

I liked this poem, and you are 12 now. What will your writing be like when your like 17.

Great poem... well about this one im speachless to tell you the truth!
take care
luv,
haya 3gab =]

This poem in amazing! Great job.such a beautiful flow and beat.It has wonderful emotion.Amwesome

This is awesome and thx ofor the comment and it was so weird i was telling someone that u have an awesome peom that they need to read the prince one then u commented my poem well good job on this i really like :D

keenan

You show a lot of emotion here.

Love it! 5/5

I really liked the imagery in this poem. Your wording was great. Keep it up :P