It's good but to me it doesn't sound like it's finished but i guess it's good

Ofmg mya dont kill urself!! omg PLZ dont!! i love this alot, and u!
~ur loser best friend~

I liked the peom itself but didn't like the structure! P.s. i got your thing off your club which is mint! coz people do read your posts so you should read theirs! and post occasionally!

Wow mya...just wow...thought i'd comment...this is awesome...love it bud.