Forever

I wrote this poem for my sister for a English project.. hehe she cant write a poem if her life depended on it. She said it was from the pride and prejudice.. the chick writing to the dude.. well i hope you like it... she got an A!

The feelings of passion, flow through my veins,
My desire for you falls down like rain.
I yearn to feel you lay by me tonight.
Forever I need you to hold me tight.

When you are near me, everything is right.
When you arent near me, its darker than night.
Im in darkness and I hear you calling.
The sound of your voice, keeps me from falling.

I needed your warm arms around my side,
To hold me on those nights I cried and cried.
Forever you and I, our lives well share
You will always be in my loving care.

I breathe for you all the time, day or night.
When people say Im crazy, they are right.
I am crazy for you, and only you.
People ask, Do I love you? Yes I do.

Being so near you, I just feel so strong.
Not being near you, it just feels so wrong.
Im trying to speak with nothing to say.
I try to breathe when you take it away.

To keep you near me, I would even kill.
I need you forever, I always will.
Some ask Will I ever let you go? Never.
You, me and Love, Forever and ever.

This is an Iambic Pentameter .. which means
Each line has 10 syllables, and it consists of 6 quatrains some people call them stanzas lol well yeah.. took me a few days and a few rough drafts to write. Hope you enjoyed it!

Copyright by Brittney Follett

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My personal favorite stanza is:

Being so near you, I just feel so strong.
Not being near you, it just feels so wrong.
Im trying to speak with nothing to say.
I try to breathe when you take it away.
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