Awhe, hun this is really nicely written. I think it was sweet, and it was one of those poems that makes you just sit and go.. "AW!" Hehe.

Another great poet that I read in this site, very well done,
I really like it

Very nice poem! I can see why she aced the paper. It was well rhymed, the flow was not forced much, and everything fit together so lovely in the end. Keep up your good work.

Well she did deserve the A! it was very well written! the words rhymed and it flowed very well as i read it!

keep it up!

It is really nice to read...
but for this to really happen....it wld be a fantasy...

i really love it though:)

Thats a really good poem! n really kind of you to do it for your sister! but i think it should get a A* or A+ !!

Very easy to relate to, pretty good word choice, but words could be a little less common. Missing some punctuation. (Well should be we'll) (Im to I'm) But that's easy to overlook. Overall I like the poem, the meaning is a lot stronger than your words, though. 4/5

A really nice poem full of feeling and it shows that you put a lot of effort into it
only one critiscism some of the lines have ten syllables some have nine one I counted was eleven
But that doesn't distract from the beauty of the poem its just that you mentioned it

5/5
Peace

John

Yikes! I fixed it because i was like " ITS WRONG?! " so i went to the original paper... when i was transfering it over to here i was typing fast so i was looking at the paper and doing it by memory.... yah sorry typo all fixed now!

This is a very beautiful romantic poem. I loved the whole concept of it. The words flowed nicely and you gave the perfect description of deep love. This poem is filled with lots of emotion and I could feel that emotion as I read. You have done a excellent job. 5/5 Keep up the wonderful work.

Letty

`my gosh . That is SOOOOO good . It`s like .. romantic . Like ACTUAL romantic . I loved the word choice and the emotion in this piece . Just beautifully written .
..__MiNDYY

I wish all love could last forever, but it rarely seems to last, amazing poem tho 5/5 for sure

Well i think its very good, its seems like a hard style to write, 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Its wonderful,5/5

WOOOW.... I really liked this poem excellent job ... its a no wander she got an A... Very,very well writtin peice 5/5!

So beautiful...
''I am crazy for you, and only you.
People ask, Do I love you? Yes I do.''
Was my my favourite part, those lines really stood out to me.
Excellently written, as always.
I thought everything worked perfectly on this.