Y0U D0NT REALiZE

by BitsAndPieces   Aug 28, 2006


I think you have no idea
just how much you mean to me
i don't believe you realize
just how happy we could be

we could walk the streets
like lovers do
You could say you love me
& I'd say I love you too

You could buy me roses
talk for hours on the phone
we could go out for dinner
& you could drive me home

I could invite you over
go to family dinners
we could play some games
We could both be winners

i could kiss you on your nose
give you kisses in the neck
kiss you in the middle of the street
kiss you everywhere - what the heck :)

I've seen it all in movies
i watched them one by one
just so i know what to do
just before you're gone

there aren't happily ever afters
and good things DO end
but we'll make one of our own
you'd stay my lover & best friend

see how you make me dream
see how you drive me crazy
you don't see how in love i am
you don't see how this is killing me .

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  • 18 years ago

    by Andi

    Great Job!!! terrific rhyme scheme...totally relatable....good description....def keep up the good work! if u could comment on my poems id appreciate it
    andi

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    0MG! THiS iS S00000 G00D! 0MG! Y0U ARE AN EXCELLENT WRiTER! iT RHYMED ALL THE WAY THR0UGH THE WH0LE THiNG && iT iS ABS0LUTELY W0NDERFUL!

    *GiRL iN L0VE

  • 18 years ago

    by mike reynolds

    Very good job, a lot of self expression. and well written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. Excellent rhyming and wonderful flow. The words in this poem were marvelous and I really got into this poem-which is good. Keep it up && don't stop writing