Great poem. Excellent rhyming and wonderful flow. The words in this poem were marvelous and I really got into this poem-which is good. Keep it up && don't stop writing

Very good job, a lot of self expression. and well written.

0MG! THiS iS S00000 G00D! 0MG! Y0U ARE AN EXCELLENT WRiTER! iT RHYMED ALL THE WAY THR0UGH THE WH0LE THiNG && iT iS ABS0LUTELY W0NDERFUL!

*GiRL iN L0VE

Great Job!!! terrific rhyme scheme...totally relatable....good description....def keep up the good work! if u could comment on my poems id appreciate it
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