Lets Play A Game

by Katlynn   Aug 28, 2006


Lets play a game.
lets be the same.
get the markers.
get the paper.

lets draw a picture.
while we play a game.
lets make them dead.
lets kiss there forehead.

i have you close your eyes.
told you it's just a shade.
of playing hiding go seek.
your breathing heavy.

i go to the kitchen.
grab the knife.
out of the cabinet.
so carefully you don't hear me.

your laying on the floor.
counting away.
away to your last breaths.
i start to Hoover over you.

the street lights go off.
the blood is on the knife.
your head is in the corner.
your body is in the middle.

i start to stab you all over.
again and again rolls.
the blood gushes out.
i don't even shout.

I'll close this scene.
I'll hide you in mom's closet.
let her deal with this pain.
because baby, i did adore you.

but as you can see now.
i could careless about you.
I'll kill you myself.
wash the blood off my sheets.

the carpet to the evidence.
I'll make the crime look more.
like a adult did it.
not your screeching girlfriend.

this is my good bye letter.
to you and your friends.
good bye babe.
sleep tight in the closet.

i grabbed your heart.
smash it on the pavement.
now you know how i feel.
what you just did to me before i killed you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. this is such a sad but very well written poem. I could feel your anger and hurt throughout the poem and you described everything very well in this. I liked the way that you begain it.. the whole idea about the game really stuck to me for some reason. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Good poem- try to capitalise all new lines and when writing 'i' use a capital 'I'.
    Just something to think about!

    ~Murder.

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven

    Nice job! keep up the good work dear friends , and did i tell u that ur poems are always better then mine
    your friend
    steven

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. very sad and it was deep but was also predictable and didn't have much suspense. But overall you had some good rhyming and an okay flow. Keep writing!

  • I liked it, 5/5. Keep it up :)

    Sarah!