by Katlynn Aug 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Lets play a game. |
by Bridgette
Aww.. this is such a sad but very well written poem. I could feel your anger and hurt throughout the poem and you described everything very well in this. I liked the way that you begain it.. the whole idea about the game really stuck to me for some reason. Great job on this! 5/5 |
by ForeverYoung
Good poem- try to capitalise all new lines and when writing 'i' use a capital 'I'. |
by Steven
Nice job! keep up the good work dear friends , and did i tell u that ur poems are always better then mine |
Good poem. very sad and it was deep but was also predictable and didn't have much suspense. But overall you had some good rhyming and an okay flow. Keep writing! |
I liked it, 5/5. Keep it up :) |