This poem is soo good.
i LOVE it!!

I liked it, 5/5. Keep it up :)

Sarah!

Good poem. very sad and it was deep but was also predictable and didn't have much suspense. But overall you had some good rhyming and an okay flow. Keep writing!

Nice job! keep up the good work dear friends , and did i tell u that ur poems are always better then mine
your friend
steven

Good poem- try to capitalise all new lines and when writing 'i' use a capital 'I'.
Just something to think about!

~Murder.

Aww.. this is such a sad but very well written poem. I could feel your anger and hurt throughout the poem and you described everything very well in this. I liked the way that you begain it.. the whole idea about the game really stuck to me for some reason. Great job on this! 5/5