What beautiful words. Your passion comes through this piece in a very touching way and whats awesome about it is the reader can see that it comes from your heart. Although this isnt a normal structure, its a characteristic that adds personality to your poem. Your words moved me.

Godbless
Sammib

Wow andy..thats awsome....haha i fixed my computer...great job

Oh my goodness..I love these lyrics..make more

OMG wow... amazing! you are so talented, now if i could only hear you sing them ;)

AWESOME 5/5!

Hey
i really like this
good work
love you xox

Hey..this is amazing...mine arnt anything compared to yours

hope to ttyl