Great poem. Excellent rhyming and wonderful flow. For your age your writing is amazing, 11 and writing way beyond your years. I can tell you are going to go far.

&& One thing...in your profile you say you will "return the favor" if someone comments on your poetry, but I've commented on many of your poems and you've never "returned the favor". What's up with that?? I may just stop commenting you since you don't stick to your word. Or you should at least take it out of your profile so people don't fall into the trap of your lying-which is exactly what you're doing by saying you'll "return the favor" and then don't!