Comments : Weeping Willow

  • 18 years ago

    by limp

    "And perfection lies in the leaves"
    this was pretty mystical. :]

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    You've taken this CC&P challenge and did an incredible job with the topic Sarah !
    Wonderfully written deary !

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Sarah... This is a beautiful write!! I am very impressed with what you have done with this challenge. I am glad that the picture had influence upon this wonderful piece. Well done!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    At first I thought the poem was really well written, until I fell into the middle when the poem mentioned the word, "You." To me it lost it's imaginative tone and fell into a narrative. Your final stanza is what brought the poem back up again.

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    I love the descriptions used it perfectly match the thought of the poem...
    Good Work!

    God Bless.

  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    Another great 1 u have 5/5