by limp
"And perfection lies in the leaves" |
by Lu
You've taken this CC&P challenge and did an incredible job with the topic Sarah ! |
by Simon Hayes
Sarah... This is a beautiful write!! I am very impressed with what you have done with this challenge. I am glad that the picture had influence upon this wonderful piece. Well done!!! |
At first I thought the poem was really well written, until I fell into the middle when the poem mentioned the word, "You." To me it lost it's imaginative tone and fell into a narrative. Your final stanza is what brought the poem back up again. |
by Misstress
I love the descriptions used it perfectly match the thought of the poem... |
by X2892
Another great 1 u have 5/5 |