Hey I really liked this one...war is something I am really against so it made this one all the more special. Thank you for the comment. (^_^)
5.5
Breanna

Tear~..i could picture everything in my mind as i read it.this poem really hits home.i love your poems.your good.

Good 4 u!!! i really hope u win!!

Of course I will be a judge but I'm not really sure what I am judging. lol Could you explain it a little more to me? lol sorry thanks xD

OKy I will but I don't know how to find the "my first contest" thing. lol I'll look for it and yeah I'de love to be a judge.

This poem is great, your a good writter (I'm going 2 reveiw all ur poems now!)

Yeah for sure ill be one!! just let me no wat i have to do.. just so u know i hardly ever sign in here i do like once a week.. if thats a problem let me know!!

Whoa! imagery there big time... powerful stuff there bud!! good job!
=) Ciao

I liked this poem. The word choice anf flow was good. 4/5