by LadyPearl Aug 28, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
What voyage does one take |
by Vanessa Lea
You are really a fantastic writer. I love this poem so much and after reading some of your others.... |
by Robie Lincer
Your poems are amazing! wow donno what to say!!! wow i love it!!! |
by Kalene
*rates it 5/5* I liked it a LOT! |
Excellent poem. The rhyming was great and it rhymed really well. It's so sad, deep and powerful. |
by Jacob Perry
This is an interesting peice and i liek it alot. i think few will understand what it is saying but all the same it is good. from the symbolism and imagery to the rhyme sceme to the structure to your diction all of it is excellent. a high quality poem :) 5/5 |