great poem jenn, like Timothy said above, a real jolt of reality there. It's like one of those Government adverts where you see the kids playing in the street but you know something's about to happen, in this case one runs into the road to get the ball and he gets hit by a driver who has had one too many. There's a great message there inside a well written poem, nice one (+thanks for ur comments), K

i like this poem... car crashes really freak me out... i hope im never in one.