Everyone gets depressed

by Braeden Monks   Aug 29, 2006


I'm alone and lost
Have I paid my cost?
Everyone has an answer
But all I see is cancer
I feel my breaths getting shorter
And the air is getting colder
No one here to hold my hand
Dying alone in the dark
Emotionless as bark
I'll hang myself on a tree
Then maybe they'd see!

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  • 18 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Good comment there lol but i think i agree with natasha on this one theres something missing i dunno what it is but ya you'll understand what i mean over time...u can only get better with practice

  • 18 years ago

    by Braeden Monks

    That is the end tho, can't really say more when your dead eh

  • 18 years ago

    by Latasha

    Good poem, but the ending needed more!

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