Wow. wow wow wow wow wow. It rhymes, tells a story and puts puts a message at the same time. Amazing.

5/5

Love Niquee

*hits u* bad tripp! bad! gersh! i love the poem, 's got nice rhythem and 's good, but GRRRRR quit it. now. u done? good. 5/5.

It surprised me. At the beginning you seemed all high and then you seemed to sober up a bit until you were fully consciece. I had a really wierd image in my head of this dream I once had while reading this. It is very interestling and you make a point. But it seems liek you go back on your own words how you say you will smoke until you die and then said your gonna stop. But it was still good. Not your best but good, better then allot of mine honestly

(thankyou for commenting me!!! )
sincerely skittles

Dude
you love your girlfriend
so why do you do this